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Post  Demelza Robins on May 17th 2011, 1:24 pm

Okay, so, I wrote a short poem in English and I really like it, so yeah.

Fear
The walls closed in on me
The rain cried down on me,
masking the fear that I tried to hide
The clouds seemed to follow me
Reminding me of the fear
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Post  Molly Prewett on May 17th 2011, 1:30 pm

That's really awesome, Dem.
I like the second line. XD

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Post  Demelza Robins on May 17th 2011, 2:44 pm

Aw, thank you!
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